Teen Poetry #4 |
Just think |
Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Tonight as we leave in our own vans We will look at each other To see what we look like and how we laugh You'll look at the book and wonder I'll miss her As we think how our friendship was created we know We will think will she be online tonight? Will she call me tonight? Will she still be my best friend in 20 years? We will think of so many things Like talking until 11:00pm every night Keeping the whole room awake But as soon as the nurses leave we talk again Seeing each other in the hall way During lunch And when we return from our activity When we return from home We will always be friends forever And when the world turns the back on us We will always have each other. I want to thank you for a lot of things like chatting until 11pm and sharing your friendship But I won't say good bye I will say see you later Kelly Your friend, Minna May 25, 2001 © Learning how to walk, Learning how to talk, are the hardest thing to do in a baby life. Learning how to walk for me is the hardest thing to do. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was a very touching poem...a very nice tribute...i really liked it and thanks for sharing it with us ...keep writing ...? i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautiful tribute.....well done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Minna, this is so nice. I used to think of a friend this was until she turned out to be a total skitz. I hope you guys do stay friends for ages. ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna --- the purity of your heart always seems to overflow in your poems. I'm truly amazed by you. keep sharing and thanks for the wonderful read. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
This is a good poem. And I hope that you and your friend will be friends forever! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so sad and so sweet! I hope you gave this to her...beautifully written.! |
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