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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 2001-06-15 10:40 PM


Now sooner or later
I idealize once again
How things should be
But I know already
Even before the plan
It’s not up to me
For you see,
I am but a little child
Trying to pass for a woman
But please be patient
‘cause I can promise you
that my budding soul
will soon come into full bloom,
And what colors you’ll see
streamed across my skin
Such a feast to the eyes,
such a beast to my purities
For they may demand that I sacrifice
All that I am to be a Queen
All for the sake of acceptance
And easier digestion
But I promise you darling
That on my way out
I’ll leave the sugar at the door

“Phoenix”
6 June, 2001


"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

© Copyright 2001 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-16 02:01 AM


...im glad to see you post again...anyways...this was nice...different but quite the enjoyable reda ...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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2 posted 2001-06-16 04:03 PM


Beautiful poem.  I like this a LOT.  It's good to see you posting again.  Keep posting all your work  

--Marie

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Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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3 posted 2001-06-17 02:27 AM


I thought this poem rocked, but what's up with the Phoenix stuff?
Anyhow, this poem really hit me hard. Awesome job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dark Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-06-17 10:52 AM


Oke...here's the deal with the phoenix thing. A few of my friends have their own little nicknames that nobody really calls them, but when they write a letter or a poem it is used. I'm not sure why. But I figured I'd do it too but I couldn't think of anything I wanted. My friend Ryan (Elessar)thought that since the phoenix is sort of "my thing" that I should pick that. So I did. Anyway, glad you liked the poem.  

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

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