Teen Poetry #4 |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Now sooner or later I idealize once again How things should be But I know already Even before the plan It’s not up to me For you see, I am but a little child Trying to pass for a woman But please be patient ‘cause I can promise you that my budding soul will soon come into full bloom, And what colors you’ll see streamed across my skin Such a feast to the eyes, such a beast to my purities For they may demand that I sacrifice All that I am to be a Queen All for the sake of acceptance And easier digestion But I promise you darling That on my way out I’ll leave the sugar at the door “Phoenix” 6 June, 2001 "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
...im glad to see you post again...anyways...this was nice...different but quite the enjoyable reda ...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Beautiful poem. I like this a LOT. It's good to see you posting again. Keep posting all your work --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem rocked, but what's up with the Phoenix stuff? Anyhow, this poem really hit me hard. Awesome job! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oke...here's the deal with the phoenix thing. A few of my friends have their own little nicknames that nobody really calls them, but when they write a letter or a poem it is used. I'm not sure why. But I figured I'd do it too but I couldn't think of anything I wanted. My friend Ryan (Elessar)thought that since the phoenix is sort of "my thing" that I should pick that. So I did. Anyway, glad you liked the poem. "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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