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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Sometimes I want to beat the punching bag until my hands are raw Sometimes I want to run until I can't breathe Sometimes I want to scream Sometimes I want to wear leather Sometimes I like putting my hair up Sometimes I want to wear skin tight shirts Sometimes I like wearing 3 inch heels Sometimes I like to look sexy Sometimes I want to wear what I FEEL LIKE wearing Sometimes I want to do something just to piss you off Sometimes I'd like to tell you where you can go Sometimes I'd like you to shut up about your petty problems Sometimes I'd like to tell you where shove your problems Sometimes your problems aren't as important as mine Sometimes I don't care that your boyfriend didn't call you Sometimes you're too self centered Sometimes I just don't care Sometimes I get sick of listening about your sad horrible life Sometimes I want you to listen to ME for once Sometimes I want you to be there for me Sometimes I want to say what I REALLY think Sometimes I don't want to take your advice Sometimes I don't want to give you advice Sometimes I don't care what you think Sometimes you're just too annoying Sometimes I want to get away from you Sometimes I want you to leave me alone Sometimes I want to slap you Sometimes I'd like to get up in YOUR face for once Sometimes I'd like to tell you where to shove that attitude Somtimes... Somtimes I despise you None of you should take this personally. I offer no appology |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
WHOA kt! whoa whoa whoa..where to begin! first of all...i liked this ALOT! it showed MAJOR MAJOR emotions...its good to get them out. i hope everythings goin ok these days...i havent talked to ya in a while! this was a really good way to show ur emotions. i can SOOOO relate to this. i think lotsa ppl feel this way sometimes. good job and hope things are ok! -jo |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"Sometimes I want to say what I REALLY think" Looks like ya did! Great job. I liked this. Keep postin.  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yep.....very blunt. I liked it and whoever this is directed to must be thinkin "woah..." and ....yea I'd be speachless. Well done here, you vented out nicely.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you let it all out didnt ya  ...and yea...VERY blunt ...and while i was reading all i saw was "sometimes"  ...ahhh!!!...umm..bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, Bel. The emotions here blew me away. No offense was taken, and for a vent like this, you shoudln't apologize. I really liked this one. Nice work. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was soooooooooooo good!!! I LOVE IT!!!  hehehe i can relate... i have a friend who'd i like to say all these things too... especially the last one"sometimes.... sometimes i despise you" only for me... instead of despise it'd be "sometimes i'm jealous of you" *L* but okay enuf of me rambling whatever. but i love this. more people should vent because i find that people are writing stuff on here like they are hurt inside. (i.e. relationship was just broken off) well instead of writing how much you want them back... write how you REALLY FEEL like you just did!!!!! hehehe GREAT JOB Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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