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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-15 04:49 PM

Tis the truth when I say to smile
Let the golden haze veil
cover the sadness
look withing your heart to know
you are truly a happy soul
do not frown for it takes to much work
Yellow suns and sapphire skys
fill a heart with tender smiles
all that is sad vanishes into the
background
Inhale.
Exhale
dear friend
do not look upon me
unless you smile
tis the truth
I know you smile
through sapphire skys
and yellow suns.

another one for a friend this is your special poem buddy. The happiest i have ever written

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2001-06-15 06:20 PM

whoa...awesome ina. i haven't read a poem of yours i didn't like. the idea that people smile to hide what they're really feeling is the absolute truth! yay for you! i seriously do luv your poems, keep postin and thanks for the read. later
-fear-

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-15 06:32 PM

Kool! Nice image and very beautiful.
...... the poem was good too......

Haha really though Nice Post!

Will It matter in the end?

Fall mountains, just don't fall on me.

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

3 posted 2001-06-15 10:36 PM

very nice and sweet. I really liked the imagery and it made me feel good inside just reading it, I really enjoyed the read. Keep posting.

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-16 02:04 AM

first of all great tribute...Ina

...i liekd the images in this one very positive thoughts

...great job!...thanks for sharing it...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-16 04:01 PM

Very nice poem, Ina. Wonderful tribute. I'm sure your friend appreciated it very much. Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-17 03:11 AM

Great job here Regi. I liked your others better, but this was stilll a nice read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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