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nikki813 Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 15PA, USA |
Simple word yet complex meaning adding on to the pain grip on reality leaning there's nothing left to gain youre world falls down while you fall up dissillusionment the source the life is draining from your cup yet you feel no remorse stress and lies add to confusion sad and lonely crying the world you know, an allusion inside you are dying there is no escape from this world this hell that you have made view of reality... swirled have all your debts been paid? the admission to the party will cost you just your life live it up while health is hearty ignoring all the strife the innocence has been attacked the hopelessness abounds from this point there's no turning back as tragic as it sounds. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there is always a way out.....it's called stopping!!!! Believe me. I know.......you just simply grow up and stop it. Powerful write  |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Sounds like someone I know... Bel |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
everyone does something for a reason. I do things for reasons. good poem |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just say no keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i can relate...great job on writing these feelings ...hope things get better...bye Nicole  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. very honest poem here. Acire's right. Just say no. There's an easy way out right there. Good luck.. I hope things get better. Thanks for sharing this with us. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I've never done drugs and don't plan on it. I said no Well done on the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
it's very good and very to the point. I know what you're going through, BELIEVE ME I've been there. It can be pretty tought. And it really made me see, that I was really in pain through that time. But the funny thing is, that it really made me feel good. Thank You....Brian....... |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
very good poem....sometimes its hard to say no and sometimes you think if you stop you will die Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow. Good write! Rhonda  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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