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nikki813
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 15
PA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-15 10:58 AM

I won't be called a "little child."
I DO know what I need.
I'm tired of this nonexistance,
My words you now must heed.
I can make my own decisions.
It's, after all, my life.
I won't be put down anymore,
words do cut like a knife.
Time to realize who I am.
I'm not a little girl.
I'll catch them now, and throw them back,
These words that you do hurl.
You still don't understand me,
I guess you never will.
I've tried my best to show you how,
but you won't see until...
It's much too late to turn back time,
you'll regret what was lost,
but ignorance is bliss they say,
no matter what the cost.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-06-15 03:25 PM

Good job! This was filled with emotion. Hope things get better for you...

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 06-15-2001).]

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-15 06:53 PM

I feel ya! Been there.......

If you live for tomorrow, you won't have to worry about today.

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I d

Julian L. Chester
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

3 posted 2001-06-15 09:16 PM

i

it. i know exactly where you are coming from but in my situation it is my mother my mother didnt understand me and still doesnt she says i used to be her baby boy but she doesnt understand that i am not still and in some way i still am but she doesnt want to exept it like that. but hey dont worry about cause because you are not the only one. excellent work though i hope u stop by my poem called The Battle

ok bye.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-16 01:55 AM

very true!...this was quite powerful and lot of emtions...i can somewhat relate to this

...great job!...bye Nicole

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-16 04:05 PM

Wowers... very powerful poem. I'm sorry you even had to write this. I hope you're okay, and I hope things get better. Until then, here's a *hug* for you. Email me if you ever need someone to talk to. Thanks for sharing this. Well done.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-17 02:29 AM

Wow, powerful message to your father.
It was filled with a lot of emotion and I just hope things work out in the end.
Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

7 posted 2001-06-17 04:34 PM

Oh wow! I could really feel you pain in this one. Excellent expression! I really hope you can get things worked out. He does love you, just probably doesn't know how to show it. Wow!
Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

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