Teen Poetry #4 |
I will love you like that |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
They read Cinderella, and you wish that it was true, Prince charming on his white horse rescuing you. You’re in to romantic movies, and you can never forget The way you felt when Romeo kissed Juliet, Longing for that someone to hold you But you don’t need to long no more. I will love you like that, ( I will love you like that ). Even when time has gone And everything goes wrong I will love you like that, ( I will love you like that ). Through the hurt and pain, through thunder and rain. I will, I will love you like that. Made a promise to you, and gave you all of my heart And I intend to keep it no matter how far you are Seen the beauty and the beast, and a tear you cried, When she told him that she loves him on that night. Waiting for mister right to come around, Now you don’t have to wait no more. I will love you like that, ( I will love you like that ). Even when time has gone And everything goes wrong I will love you like that, ( I will love you like that ). Through the hurt and pain, through thunder and rain. I will, I will love you like that. I will give you tenderness, Make the earth under you shack I’ll bye all the happiness, In this world for you. I will love you like that, ( I will love you like that ). Even when time has gone And everything goes wrong I will love you like that, ( I will love you like that ). Through the hurt and pain, through thunder and rain. I will, I will love you like that. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like the song by the same name.....this starts out VERY much like it....but I like the way you ended this |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I love that song too...and I like the way you incorporated some of the song into it! it's sooooooooo cool!! keep it up! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was nice. The song is good, as is this poem. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was really good work. i like that song |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this a lot! Another song well done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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