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Pickleweasel
New Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 7
AL

0 posted 2001-06-13 04:26 AM

Hey everyone. I don't have a title for this poem, but here it is

He sits at home with nothing to do
He's sitting there just thinking of you
Hoping and praying that you'll realize
You made a mistake with the other guys
He's what you want and what you ask for
But you gave him no chance, just showed him the door
He just left without saying a word
Leaving you not knowing your choice was absurd
It's over now
You've made your mistake
Although you he'd probably take
If only you wanted to give him a shot
But you're too busy with some other plot

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2001-06-13 04:33 AM

yaaaaay for pickle!!!!! lol i'm really glad you joined. there are some pretty cool people here, and i'm sure you'll like it. hopefully it doesn't turn out like me joining your e-fed tho...:-S kool poem...yet sad :-( talk to you on aol and everything. c-ya.
love ya lots
-berg-

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

2 posted 2001-06-13 08:09 AM

nice intro there pick I like the flow and I know that problem lol and most of all Welcome to Passions

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-06-13 09:09 AM

Welcome to passions! This was a really nice first post...Keep postin! I cant wait to see more from you

P.S.- Check your e-mail for a special greeting

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

4 posted 2001-06-13 11:58 AM

Very Nice first Post! Good flow and meaning! My kind of poem

Can't wait to see more

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2001-06-13 12:21 PM

Right on!

Welcome to Passions!

I know you'll have an awesome time in here. I know I do. I like the poem. Made me realise that (duh) guys have feelings too. Sometimes I wish I could come here without a reason... but enough about me, let's talk about you. That was a great poem! The flow was really good! Can't wait to see more!

Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy."

[This message has been edited by Skyfire (edited 06-13-2001).]

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

6 posted 2001-06-13 01:04 PM

This is really good! I like the way it flows, and the emotion behind it. It does make us girls (some of us anyway

) realize that guys do have feelings too. Hope to see more, and Welcome!

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

7 posted 2001-06-13 01:19 PM

Welcome to Passions I really enjoyed the read, a great first post

I hope you have a great time here.
Zu

"Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

8 posted 2001-06-13 02:12 PM

Welvome to passions!!! hope u like it here.
Love the username..lol

Great first post. hope to see more

Regina

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

9 posted 2001-06-13 03:07 PM

Welcome to Passions. I know where you're coming from with this one, but I've learned now that you should let go, if they want, they'll come back. I liked this and I hope to see more soon.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

10 posted 2001-06-13 11:52 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS...this was a very nice first post...i enjoyed it...hope to see you read, share reply more

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

11 posted 2001-06-15 02:00 AM

*Sings* pickle pickle pickle....
lol i am really bored n just wanted to say hi so....
hi!!!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

12 posted 2001-06-15 09:01 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS! i loved this first post! keep it up please!

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

Pickleweasel
New Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 7
AL

13 posted 2001-06-15 10:21 AM

Thanks for compliments on my poem you guys. It's a nice welcome. I'll probably be posting some of my other stuff later. I'll be replying to you guys's stuff as well. Thanks again

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

14 posted 2001-06-15 12:43 PM

Hey hey hey, welcome to our world. This was enjoyed much....hope to see you 'round more. Have a great one!

~Carly

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..."
~Edouard Manet

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

15 posted 2001-06-16 03:13 AM

GOod job here! Welcome to Passions!
This sounds like a tough situation to be in, but not that uncommon at our age.....it happens at any age at that! I mean passing up a chance is just a horrible experience all together.
Hope all works out in the end!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

16 posted 2001-06-16 03:21 PM

nicely done! welcome to passions in poetry! your username is cute

This is a very good first post. I look forward to reading more soon

Well done.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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