Teen Poetry #4 |
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Evermore Do I Dream |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
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“Evermore Do I Dream” Evermore do I dream Of those once belated scenes Shrouded by the mists of time Gathered up I can move no more Halted by these visions Without cause I cannot fight I pray for you to see me through this night So that I may endure another day of suffering Atoning for my sins Which are yet to be known Hoping for love, where indifference is shown But these things I cannot help From this path I cannot turn Because it’s for you that my heart does yearn Over time this feeling grows Groping through the shadows for you hand to hold While I dream sweet woeful dreams of you forever more It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"While I dream sweet woeful dreams of you forever more" I like this line best.....very cool ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem...word choices were great...i liked this one a lot ![]() ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Another great one. I really enjoy reading your work. ![]() Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here! I enjoyed this one, although it wasn't my fav by you. Still, it was a good read. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Thank you all for your replies It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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