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Teen Poetry #4

Beyond Time

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2001-06-14 04:02 PM

“Beyond Time”

Beyond the narrow passages of time
I see a glimmering of the past
Of the days that I held you close
To this heart of mine

But its all past
I should just let go
Yet every time I let it be
It seems to come running back to me

Gasping for love
As one does air
But no matter how hard I try
You simply are not there

So through these winding halls I shall wander
Praying that one soon I will see the present
Escaping these gates of time
And hold you close
To this heart of mine

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-14 05:11 PM

very dreamy feel to this.....soft and floating

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-14 06:02 PM

lovely poem...enjoyed greatly

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-14 09:26 PM

This had a powerful feel to it. The impact was great.

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-16 06:53 PM

I liked this one a lot. A very dream feel to it....nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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