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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

0 posted 2001-06-14 03:35 PM

I dreamed last night
I dreamed about you
I don't remember where we were
But it was someplace fancy
I think it was a dance
You were actually dressed up
Someone had forced me into a dress
No big deal, right?
It was my prom dress, hon
I don't think we were back at prom
Anyway, you looked great
You looked at me like I was a princess
Which I am, but that's not the point
That's the way you looked at me at prom
I could see the love in your eyes
I could feel your love when you held me
It was like you didn't want to let me go
But then I woke up
Do you love me too?
Or was everything you said a lie?
I'm afraid of what the dream means
I don't usually dream of a guy
And when I do?
Usually I wake up and I'm over him
I'm not sure I want to be over you
I dreamed last night
We were happy, you know
In real life we were once happy too
I think I'm starting to let go
Get on with my life
I dreamed last night
I loved you then, and I love you now
Maybe I'll love you forever

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-14 05:08 PM

kinda confusing...but I like this

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-14 06:04 PM

interesting how you wrote this...i enjoyed the read...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-14 09:24 PM

It was an intersting piece. not your best though. but still good work

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-16 06:51 PM

This was great....it was quite confusing, but it did add some sort of effect lol. Nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-06-16 10:41 PM

You looked at me like I was a princess
Which I am, but that's not the point
HaHa- I liked that.
Nice read!
Keep postin.

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