Teen Poetry #4 |
- First Kiss - Continues in... "End of the day" |
Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
Hey, this is a sort of "unofficial" continuation of one of my earlier poems called "First Kiss", if you haven't read it, check it out (heh heh, I knew I could slip in a plug somewhere...) Anyway, hope you enjoy it... - End of the day - Night time comes, So freshly it breaths. Turns light to dark, It's time now to leave. The sun withdraws, It then goes away. To find warmth again, When the night turns to day. The kiss of the sun, Is on the landscape replaced. By the lovingly tender, Moonlit embrace. In the twinkle of an eye, The stars they shine bright. An eternal flame burning, Both old and new light... There ya go, the analogy continues... Seems love poems are the flavour of the month!! -Wood_Stock- |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
man that really rocked I loved how it flowed and such, just really good library piece in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I liked this one a lot. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice poem...i liked it ...love poetry seems like the flauor of every month ...anyways...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautifully written poem. I see a lot of potential, keep em coming. thanks for the read hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
i like your classic verses. Very nicely done! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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