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Wood_Stock
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0 posted 2001-06-14 08:13 AM



Hey,
this is a sort of "unofficial" continuation of one of my earlier poems called "First Kiss", if you haven't read it, check it out (heh heh, I knew I could slip in a plug somewhere...)

Anyway, hope you enjoy it...


- End of the day -


Night time comes,
So freshly it breaths.
Turns light to dark,
It's time now to leave.

The sun withdraws,
It then goes away.
To find warmth again,
When the night turns to day.

The kiss of the sun,
Is on the landscape replaced.
By the lovingly tender,
Moonlit embrace.

In the twinkle of an eye,
The stars they shine bright.
An eternal flame burning,
Both old and new light...


There ya go, the analogy continues...
Seems love poems are the flavour of the month!!

-Wood_Stock-

© Copyright 2001 Noel Wilson - All Rights Reserved
the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23
Posts 316
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1 posted 2001-06-14 08:49 AM


man that really rocked I loved how it flowed and such, just really good library piece

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-06-16 10:43 PM


Well done here. I liked this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-06-17 12:52 PM


nice poem...i liked it ...love poetry seems like the flauor of every month ...anyways...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-06-22 04:12 PM


beautifully written poem.  I see a lot of potential, keep em coming.  thanks for the read

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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5 posted 2001-06-22 05:25 PM


i like your classic verses.  Very nicely done!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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