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you and me |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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you and me, together forever. that's what i dreamed. you don't love me, like i love you. i wish you did. you rather chase the other girl instead. i'm sorry you don't think i'm the one. i pray for god to show you wrong. i know that's wrong. so far it hasn't happened so don't worry. i wish i was eith you. i feel you are the one. am i with the right one. i love you but do you love me. please help me see. ok this is for the one i really love. i don't think he loves me i wish he did. robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
sorry for the mis spelled words. |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
this was sad  i hope u feel better soon if love wants me, then it can come find me |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
remember that saying...."thank God for unanswered prayers"?! yeah...I know that doesn't make it any easier.....but honestly....it's true  hugs... SEA |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww... this is sweet. It's a tough situation, and I'm sorry you have to go through it. Just keep your head up, and keep writing about it... it helps. And always keep smiling. Nicely done on the poem.--Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. keep them coming!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Oh, this is too sweet, I love it! Keep writing! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
thanks yall the person i wrote this for didn't figure it out yet. robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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