Teen Poetry #4 |
The last time |
Cinch01 Junior Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 14RS, BR |
I wake up in the middle of the night I wonder why I can’t sleep I spent the whole night thinking What’s wrong with me? What is the matter? Finally, at sun rise My eyes close and I can rest I dream of you and me I wake up as like that dream was bad What can I do to take you out of my head? I thought I got over you. Yesterday we talked Bringing back old memories Things I wanted to forget Things I wanted to leave there In my past I thought I was over you I looked at your picture and smiled But yesterday after we talked I turned on the radio It was playing our song And your picture was on the shelf Two days ago I would have smiled Now I could only cry. Why don’t you understand What goodbye means? I wanted to keep in touch with you I wanted to be your friend I’m sorry, I can’t But you can’t say I haven’t tried It’s just too hard for me It is just too painful. So, once again I’m saying goodbye And this is definitely The last time. |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
sad.............very sad......... if love wants me, then it can come find me |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
heartfelt poem...very sad...you expressed this very well...great job ...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very sad poem. It's well written, but sad. Passions has seemed to move into a heartache era. I hope things work out the way you want with this situation. Nice work on the poem, I really enjoyed the read. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes this was such a sad poem. *sigh* I felt it hard. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Wow, I know how this one is... But this is really good. I like this one a lot. Can't wait til your next one. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
i feel for you, cinch. you've written this very well; i especially like the way it closes. Good job! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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