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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Did you ever realize The way you say things With your eyes The way you hold me When I cry The way you show me Everything. Did you ever notice how You always seem to Keep your vows The way you never Push me out The way you smile All the time. Have you ever felt what's true How I used to feel When I'm with you How you could feel When I was blue And never leave my Side. If you didn't notice Anything How could you have Noticed me? ========== An oldie. Just needed to post something...heh.  I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked this poem...great job...emotions were nicely expressed...hope to see more from the oldie's ...bye Dj*ahem*Leah  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really good |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Deejay, an oldie but definitely a goodie. You write so well. Great job on this one. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
This is good, even if it's an oldie. Keep it up!  I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
hey Leah! I like this poem!  great job! keep it up! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The oldie was a nice one. I liked it leah!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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