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HVNsnt82086
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0 posted 2001-06-05 09:33 PM


You'll Never Know my love for you,
or just how much I care.
You'll Never Know how my heart beats,
just because you're there.

I love you from a distance,
I'm too afraid to come close.
Because rejection is unbarrable,
when it comes from whom you love most.

You'll Never Know how I adore your smile,
how I tingle when it shows,
And how I get a warm sensation,
running from my head to my toes.

You'll Never Know my love for you,
because my feelings will never be made known.
I tell you nothing of my love,
though it means being alone.

[This message has been edited by HVNsnt82086 (edited 06-07-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-05 09:50 PM


Welcome to passions   this was a really nice first post. Hope to see more. keep posting and again welcome to passions.
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3 posted 2001-06-05 10:00 PM


This is a great first post.  Welcome!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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4 posted 2001-06-05 10:58 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!!  

Nice to have you with us! This was a great first post and i know what you're going through all too well...Keep on postin! I cant wait to see more from you   Welcome again!

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5 posted 2001-06-05 11:45 PM


Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this first post. Well done! I hope to see you around more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-06-05 11:48 PM


great first post...a emotional one ...i liked hopw you eneded it ...and WELCOME TO PASSIONS...hope to see you read, share and reply a lot!...bye Laura

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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7 posted 2001-06-06 12:17 PM


i thought this was great. i could relate to what you said here. good job.i think i will put it in my library. hope to see more.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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8 posted 2001-06-06 12:53 PM


Aww!  *Sniffles*  It reminds me of that song by Selena, "I Could Fall In Love."  Or something like that anyways.  *Smiles*

Excellent poem!  It definitely explains that love for a close friend, or even innocent love for a stranger.  *Shrugs*  I interpret it both ways.  Hope those were your intentions!


(By the way...welcome to Passions.  *Giggles*)

"The only thing that boggles the mind is the mind itself."

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9 posted 2001-06-16 03:09 PM


Welcome to pipTalk.
This is a very nicely written first post.  I enjoyed reading this a LOT.  Thanks for sharing, and I look forward to reading more from you.  Nice work.

--Marie

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Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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