Teen Poetry #4 |
You'll Never Know |
HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
You'll Never Know my love for you, or just how much I care. You'll Never Know how my heart beats, just because you're there. I love you from a distance, I'm too afraid to come close. Because rejection is unbarrable, when it comes from whom you love most. You'll Never Know how I adore your smile, how I tingle when it shows, And how I get a warm sensation, running from my head to my toes. You'll Never Know my love for you, because my feelings will never be made known. I tell you nothing of my love, though it means being alone. [This message has been edited by HVNsnt82086 (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
Welcome to passions this was a really nice first post. Hope to see more. keep posting and again welcome to passions. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! Please check your email for a special greeting! ~SEA |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
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This is a great first post. Welcome! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to Passions!!!! Nice to have you with us! This was a great first post and i know what you're going through all too well...Keep on postin! I cant wait to see more from you Welcome again! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this first post. Well done! I hope to see you around more! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great first post...a emotional one ...i liked hopw you eneded it ...and WELCOME TO PASSIONS...hope to see you read, share and reply a lot!...bye Laura i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
i thought this was great. i could relate to what you said here. good job.i think i will put it in my library. hope to see more. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Evylyn Junior Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 20Florida, USA |
Aww! *Sniffles* It reminds me of that song by Selena, "I Could Fall In Love." Or something like that anyways. *Smiles* Excellent poem! It definitely explains that love for a close friend, or even innocent love for a stranger. *Shrugs* I interpret it both ways. Hope those were your intentions! (By the way...welcome to Passions. *Giggles*) "The only thing that boggles the mind is the mind itself." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to pipTalk. This is a very nicely written first post. I enjoyed reading this a LOT. Thanks for sharing, and I look forward to reading more from you. Nice work. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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