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~*~butterfly~*~
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0 posted 2001-06-14 02:15 AM


Hey everyone!!  I haven't been in this room in a long time but i've read some of the work in the last couple days.  All I can say is WOW you guys are great!!!  I hope my work will fit right in with yours  

BECAUSE OF YOU
my words have come back
as though magic was breathed into me
the laughter and joy you brought to me
helped me to be free

you make me laugh and make me smile
help me to forget my troubles for a little while
but you also listen, and are there to lend a hand
caring and compassionate, you truly understand

i am alive
for i live with feeling
with meaning
you showed me who you really are

because of you...
i have something to believe in
something to live for
something to look forward to

our love...


~kass~

© Copyright 2001 Kasandra Baldner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-14 02:19 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONs!!...and you'll always fit in...im glad you decide to join here its such a great place...and i thought this was a beautiful poem...i really liekd it the last verse perfect...as i look forward in seeing more from you to read share and reply...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

fearing-laughter
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2 posted 2001-06-14 02:48 AM


hey! great first post.  i know wut you mean about being worried about not fitting in here, but i know you will.  don't be shy to post!! welcome to passions!!!
-fear-

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3 posted 2001-06-14 07:43 AM


Welcome to Passions this is a great first post, well done. I hope to see more of your work round here and I hope you have a good time while you are here.
Zu

"Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918.


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4 posted 2001-06-14 08:59 AM


Awww, very sweet. It's a wonderful start here!!! Welcome to Passions!!!! I look forward to more from you.

Jenn

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

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5 posted 2001-06-14 09:03 AM


hey WELCOME TO Passions and that was a great first post.  

The Rescue

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

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6 posted 2001-06-14 09:04 AM


Welcome! Please check your email for a special greeting!    ~SEA
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7 posted 2001-06-14 09:20 AM


Welcome to passions!!!!!!!!!!!!! You will ALWAYS fit in here  I liked your first post and i look forward to seeing more from you. Welcome again!
~*~butterfly~*~
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8 posted 2001-06-16 02:21 PM


hey thank you all for replying!!! i appreciate it very much!!    

"When faced with a challenge look for a way, not a way out."

~kass~

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9 posted 2001-06-16 03:09 PM


Welcome to Passions!! This was so great! I really liked this one. The ending was awesome. I liked it a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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10 posted 2001-06-16 03:23 PM


Welcome to Passions!
This is such a sweet first post.  Nicely written... I can't wait to read more.  Keep posting all your work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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