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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
To a dear friend: Like a fragile butterfly A mystery to me You are like a dolphin That knows its way to sea. With your radiant smile You can light up any room On a winter's evening You are a flower in full bloom. Every time I talk to you What I say is true You'll make me laugh on any day And make the gray skies blue. When it rains, it always pours When I look outside But when you come, the madness stops As you calm the storm inside. You are the rainbow in the sky The choral in the sea Rare and beautiful your friendship is As it will always be. The sun will shine upon your life This blessing I do send Forever I will remember you For you are my dear friend. -Leah |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. The imagery is wonderful, and the flow just makes this poem... well, perfect! I can't believe it doesn't have any replies yet! Well, thanks for sharing!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is so beautiful..*sniff sniff*...your frined is one special person...i enjoyed reading this greatly...like erica said..the flow was perfect...ugh..you have to show this to your friend..im sure they'll love you all the more for it!  ...thanks for sharing leah.....this is a lovely poem
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Awesome poem... it really touched my heart... totally reminds me of my best friend! "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
aww this is so pretty! lol i wish my friends would write me somethin like this...we're all pretty mean to each other though. (weird i know) this was a really kool poem! keeeeeeeeep posting! -fear- |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
oh wow that was cool I realy liked it a lot beautiful imagery and the flow was really great thanx going in lib in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was beautifully written. You really did a wonderful job with this, and I hope to find more of your work. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aww! That was so sweet! And, that's all I have to say... Keep it up! Rhonda  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy." |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Thank you all for your comments...although...I HAVE NO FRIENDS!!! WAAAAAAAAH! *in the background: LIAR!* ...  Ok, I lied.I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite the touching piece and i hope you did give this to the person you wrote it for....beautiful poem ...bye LEah  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is sweetness......wrapped up in rhyme |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here Leah! This rocked! I really thought this was a wonderful poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful words my friend. really sweet. keep it coming hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
What a tear jerker! Its so beautiful and touching! Great write, keep it up. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
AGH! 13! BAD NUMBER! I'm not superstitious though...it's just for the rest of them...  Thank you all for your comments! Much appreciated. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aww Leah you shouldn't have!  lolNah this is a really nice piece. What a wonderful friend you have. I hope this friendship remains like this forever. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
whoa, the site worked! (It didn't last time I tried to come here..) Anyway, that is a very cool poem. I bet it made your friend smile realll wide *TiMMYBoY* |
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