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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
From the Begining to the end of time He's there faithfully guiding us and showing He does care with every setting of the sun and every rising of the moon I pray that He would return soon YHWH lead me and I will follow Guide my paths for tomorrow Make your voice audible and clear May it be only your voice I hear Time and again I fall short of your glory but I rise up so I continue this untold story my life a sacrifice an offering to you alone the Son of God seated to the right of God's throne YHWH lead me and I will follow guide my paths for tomorrow make your voice audible and clear may it be only your voice I hear I look to the left and to the right but only when I look forward do I see the light I hear the shepards voice drawing me near telling me to run the race and not to fear YHWH lead me and I will follow guide my paths for tomorrow make your voice audible and clear may it be only your voice I hear FYI YHWH is one of the many Jewish names for God in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
Hey!! you used the NAME. rock on! YHWH is the translitteration for the Hebrew word that represents the most holy name of God. it is litterally a verb of being, or "I AM".  my sister is a messianic jew, she's learning hebrew so I get to learn all this cool stuff. good job jimmy.But His word was in my heart |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is very well done! And now I've learned something new, thank you  |
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Julian L. Chester Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 50 |
i dont realy like the poem because i feel that there is a lot of false things being said in this poem. i was in the belief of YHWH. and from what i know of being in that belief that is not true. YHWH is not another name for a God or gods. and this poem was written from someone who doesnt really know what YHWH means and is about. causeif you dont know there is a belief on this such name then you cant write a poem on something you barely know anything about. but it would be a nice poem if you knew what YHWH was all about and if i didnt know what YHWH meant i would of loved this poem. and Just to let every body know YHWH is not Hebrew. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
yhwh is hebrew, and i do actually know what I'm talking about. something you lacked in your believe was faith in what you believed after talking to you, it appears that you questioned things to much, also the fact remains whether you know a lot about YHWH (God) is totally differnet than having a personal relationship with him. Cause once you have that your faith will be strong, you can't deny God when you've really experienced him. in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ah, I recall a time when I could have written something similar to this...Those days are gone, however, and I don't intend to get them back. The poem was good - you stuck with your theme well. Arrivederci.... ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed the poem and will state that since it's religious people may differ from your belief.....be open minded and if you have anything to say that might be a bit offensive or something else then do it out of this forum. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
why do you say its not hebrew? would you care to share what it really DOES mean? i'm really interested.... dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job!...but i was rteading ita ll that was going thru my mind was...umm...YHWH?  ...but thanks for the explanation at the end...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I'm really not going to say too much, as I don't want to offend ANYONE in ANY way. Good poem, I liked this a lot. I'm trying to learn a little about Judaism, as I know very close to nothing and religion interests me. Good job  Bel |
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Julian L. Chester Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 50 |
see thats many peoples problems because if you dont question you will never know and that what makes it easier for people to deseave you with out you even knowing it and it makes you unaware what your actually doing and when people try to show and help you then you become ignorant and very hard to talk to and i know more than what you even know and what you will know about YHWH and it is not hebrew cause you only took it for granted when you told me you seen it in the scriptures because just because it is in the scriptures doesnt make it true ok and you said that you didnt look up and study what YHWH actually means so that just proves how ignorant you are acting when i talked to you about the situation and what i want to know is y are you taking an offense when we were both having a nice coversation but you wanted to get mad and come back here and write this crap about me. how dare you. that just comes to show how people can come talk to you about there own beleives and being willing enough to even try to let you know something that has been proven and that can be proven for your sake. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
chester man I'm actually sorry I said those things no I have not studdied hebrew in length but I do meet with my pastor frequently and he has studied it in depth, so I trust his word yes he may be a man but in my eyes he is a man of God and therefor i trust him I am sorry for what I said to or about you though my bad man |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
um um um.... ok.... nevermind. i guess i won't say anything. julian, if you want to talk, you can e-mail me sometime. i'd like to hear what you have to say about the non-hebrew origen of "yahwey"... cause my sister studies hebrew, and is a jew. i am just an ingorant goy. ha. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart like a burning fire Shut up in my bones; I was weary of holding back, And I could not. [This message has been edited by Dr. Jo-Bizz (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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