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Time is my enemy
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Time is my enemy |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Time is my enemy it takes charge and gets the best of me it locks me in it's jail cells with alarms and 12 o'clock bells Time is my enemy it has me trapped in it's conspiricy the one which states theres not enough time so just shut your mouth and act like a mime Time is my enemy but never will it get the best of me although it tries it won't hold me down I'm in search of an eternal crown Time is my enemy but time to me is infinity no boundries because forever I will live because God chose this sinner to forgive in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well done, I really enjoyed the read  Zu "Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918. |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
hey,i really like it jimmy. good job. I feel that way sometimes about time, or the lack thereof. dr jo But His word was in my heart |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one! Well done here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice poem. I am really growing fond of your work. You do a rather good job with freeverse. Have you ever tried anything with a little more structure, like something with syllable count? I think you might like to try it. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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