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joycerogers
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

0 posted 2001-05-18 02:07 PM

Excuse me, but
I do believe
That I percieve
A spirit of jealousy.

You definitely hold
A special place,
But there's something
You've failed to see.

I am your friend but,
I am not yours.

Your possesive self
Will only bring our
realtionship a pending death.
It makes no sense,
For you to be so dense.

Do you think that you're the
Only one, habitating my world.
I refuse to let your tudes blow
Me around in your tornado's whirl.

I will not let you unfold me,
Nor will I let you control me.
So you might as get a grip,
Cuz I ain't lettin' you put
Me on no guilt trip.

Get over it sistah girl.
I may be your friend but
I am not yours.

O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you.

Joyce Rogers

[This message has been edited by joycerogers (edited 05-18-2001).]

thedarkangel
Member

since 2001-05-12

Posts 74
~*~the cutest~*~

1 posted 2001-05-18 02:11 PM

that's so great. no one should have the power to change who you are. beat those feelings down and come up on top.
love peace and eyeliner
angel
-x-

Each Moment in time is a pinprick in eternity-Marcus Aurilius
Seize the day;think how many ladies passed up dessert on the Titanic!

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-05-18 05:39 PM

i like the voice you used when you wrote this, it gave the whole piece a really cool tone. i enjoyed this, i look forward to reading more of your work

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-05-19 01:18 PM

You don't need to take none of that.

I like this poem because it had power. Poetry that puts you above the problem and talks down to it is always my favourite.
Great work.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-19 04:18 PM

i really liked the sistagirl part in the poem. I like your style in here....you write well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-21 02:23 AM

i liked how u have wrote this...enjoyed the read...keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-05-22 07:48 AM

You definately dont need to take this...you should tell this person how you feel and who knows, maybe they never realized what they were doing and everything will be ok

I hope!!!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-05-22 08:47 AM

Ooooh I know this too well. I am jealous by nature, but you gotta learn to put a lid on it if they're not YOURS. You aren't dating, so you gotta deal, you know?
LOL Anyway, I thought this was great.

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

8 posted 2001-05-22 09:52 AM

You go girl!! Hehe, this was very powerful and I'm glad to see that you fought for yourself in this piece!! Don't take none of that from anybody!!

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-06-12 02:53 PM

You Go Girl!!!
keep sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

Julian L. Chester
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

10 posted 2001-06-12 04:28 PM

i love the poem not only because it has power but because it points out a lot of things that go on in a friendship relationship. especially when that friend wants to become your boyfriend or girlfriend. it occurs to both male and females so i hope they all read this. excellent writing though. please come to mine.%%

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

11 posted 2001-06-12 05:24 PM

i like it nice job

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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