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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
I stepped outside yesterday to get away from it all sitting in the middle of suburban america I can still hear your call The birds sing your praises with there songs so sweet stepping into the street I hear the wind calling your name the sun in the sky proclaims your glory with it's radience, while the stars shine of your infinite beauty while walking along the beach I hear the waves giving praise to you name from sea to shinning sea your glory reigns the mountains cry holy from their highest peaks while the valleys cry worthy from the deepest depths The rain storms proclaim your might with its beautiful display of power while the quiet spring day shows your grace and mercy every thing around me shows evidence of existance from the tiniest particle to vastness of this universe so how then could I ever deny you for if I stay silent the very rocks will scream your glory in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
aww....amazing this was so good....and so ahh...happy. It was great and made me feel good. Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Very good I really enjoyed the read  Zu |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was real good work. keep it up. Regina |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very nice rescue. I enjoy reading the religious pieces. It was extremely enjoyable. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
wow. that's awesome jimmy. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautfiul imagery...i liked how you expressed this...great job here ...hope to see more...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
whoa.... This was quite good. This sounds a lot like a psalm, indeed. I will definitely be saving this to my library. Looks like I'm not the only one making this bold move of posting spiritual poetry in the teen forum...  "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here.....I liked this one. I love the religious reads too.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
yeah fractal if we stay silent the very rocks will cry out in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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