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MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-13 02:41 PM

The closer you look at a Rose
The more you notice about it.
Even the thorns become a sign of beauty

I've encountered an everblooming rose
The more I'm around her, the more beauty I see.
Everyday, I notice something unique about her
She is an everblooming rose
A new dimension of overtaking bizarre ecstacy
Every petal refined to perfection

An everblooming rose
She takes my breath away

When she opens up to me.
There's nothing else I want to see.
Nothing else matters to me
If she only knew, how much I know
How her beauty shows
Maybe she would realize
She's an everblooming rose

Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually...

Why do people remind me of vacuums?

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2001-05-13 02:49 PM

God ewok. this is going into my library. this was just breath taking. wow! who ever this is about shes lucky to have someone like you hun. *hugs* that was just awww man i cant even say. great job! lol love you much
*knows who its about now* lol i hope she likes this ewok. im sure she will duh cuz its fantastic and its about her.

good luck!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"You say i only hear what i want too..."

That girl Megz cant write
New Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 7
State: Confusion

2 posted 2001-05-13 05:27 PM

weLL....I honestly don't know what to say... hMm...I have already told you what I thought about the poem and how much I LOVED it!!* haha...*blushes*...I know, let me just use one of your favorite phrases and end this with.... "WOW"
Love you!

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-13 07:51 PM

this is a beautiful image, i really love this piece, it is my favorite from you thusfar. great writing, keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-14 12:27 PM

this had so much beauty in words you have written the imagery was great...thanks for the read...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-16 07:33 PM

Very nicely done. I liked it a lot. very sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-05-21 09:01 PM

such sweet and romantic words. This person must really be special

keep it up

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

7 posted 2001-05-21 09:05 PM

*awe struck*

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

8 posted 2001-06-12 12:13 PM

Ewokz..*stands amazed*..you know what i think of this alreadys, but I thought I'd still reply.."wowz" *likes it..a lot* and *awwz* at your love for her..*cute* *hugz*
~Anna *waves*

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