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Julian L. Chester
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

0 posted 2001-06-11 02:27 AM

Females

Females are the most
beautiful beings in this world.
Females need to be tooken
well care of
Females think that they can
handle there own and dont
need a man but they need theirselves.
But what is the real answer to that?

I know that answer, but it is
not my doing or will to tell or say.
I learned the way a female feels and
thinks from a female.
It is hard to understand a female
but for me it was kind of easy.

Females are like precious fruits.
They are the most precious.
Males can live without them,
but they dont choose to.
Females can learn a lot from males.
But are stubborn to try,
because of their ways.

Some females believe that
they are suppose to be
the one in charge of their
relationships.
But they are wrong.

But that is one thing
you must learn before you
have a relationship with a
Female.

For the females that read this dont take it the wrong way cause i do believe that some females should be independent if they want and i am not saying that you need a man or any thing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-06-11 03:21 AM

You stated your view point well.....some people may disagree with this strongly, especially the females.
I thought you did this well even though my personal opinions may differ from this.

I urge all the females to not reply in a hostile manner

Anyhow, I enjoyed this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2001-06-11 04:20 AM

hi hi, well...this poem is probably gonna anger a few girls here. the only part that actually kinda got me annoyed is this though
Some females believe that
they are suppose to be
the one in charge of their
relationships.
But they are wrong.

no offense...but that was a tad messed up lol. good post though.
-fear-

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-11 09:28 AM

I promise i wont be hostile.
all i have to say is:
it is all in the eye of the beholder.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-06-11 09:45 AM

Very debatable thoughts there my friend. I too would like to ask the girls not to take offense and not to reply in such a hostile manner.

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fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-11 11:07 PM

This brought a smile to my face. Thanks for the enjoyable read.As for offending, I've read a few poems here that express views against the male gender so I think its all in equality that you write this. Without opinions, we'd all be paper dolls, and who wants to dance with something without a backbone?

SeanD.

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2001-06-12 12:08 PM

I won't be hostile. Very good. You wrote your opinions without managing to annoy me, which is talent, in my opinion.

Why can't we be in charge of the relationships? It's so much more fun that way, don't you think?

Anyway, good poem, really.
Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy."

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

7 posted 2001-06-12 12:35 PM

Hm.. I don't necessarily agree on this either. But women certainly can be complex both romantically and platonically. BTW, I couldn't pass this up simply because it sticks out like a sore thumb,

"Females need to be tooken
well care of"

This is a major gramatical error. Sorry if I've offended you, but I think you might like to smooth out that sort of stuff while you're here. BTW, don't worry. We all make mistakes. Like that one piece I claimed was in blank verse simply because it had ten syllable lines, LOL.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Julian L. Chester
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

8 posted 2001-06-12 02:55 PM

hi to all especially females.
i wrote this poem cause i am tired of the males being put out there like they are nothing and that has to stop because like myself not all males in this world are dogs and stuff like that. but if that is the way u feel then that is the way u feel. but i dont care is your hostile or not cause that is one of the reasons, well the major reasons i put this out there cause i want to know how the females feel about this poem the most. i love females and the part where i said about females being in charge... well i dont mind that much but they abuse the will of being incharge to much. some males do like that in a women but to me i feel that it should be equal on both parts. yes i know it is fun but u shouldnt punish all males for what the majority of males do. so if u want to be hostile please do so cause i want to know exactly how u feel and trust me when i say this, i will not be offended by ne thing you say that is hostile cause like what i said before that is your personal opinion and every one is intitled to what he/she's own opinion on every one of my poems.

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