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Teen Poetry #4

I Just want somebody

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-10 10:51 PM

I Just Want Somebody

This alone
It doesn't matter
I need to relax
But I can't when the  DespaIr
   haunts me
      so rapidly
        a specter not unlike me(ghosts everywhere)
Ghosts are here I can't   touch

        Somebody that will be held
        Somebody that will kiss and not tell
        Somebody who needs warmth
        Somebody to share with

This is what I want
i've always wanted
This classified remains
i am dead to them
It doesn't matter
This walking is getting old (constantly)
I don't want   stars
               moons
               galaxies
               oceans
I just wish
for something
    for somebody (who'll stay
I want U
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this is kinda related to my other poem i posted.  I wrote them back to back

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-06-10 10:59 PM

cute..I like this, and if I remember right, I read and liked the other..? not sure, but I'll find out. (I have a bad memory)

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-11 01:37 AM

I really liked this poem a lot. You have impressed me with your current pieces....completely dif. from your past posts. What's up with this? I am becoming a fan of your poems.....awesome job here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-11 04:06 PM

I remember how this feels.....that want and need....

it will happen....alone doesn't last forever.....

~SEA

Dana Samples
Member

since 2001-04-07

Posts 68

4 posted 2001-06-12 12:22 PM

remember what Sea wrote up there. its true. but the feeling that you have is so very powerful. remeber it too. it was a good poem. i enjoyed it. keep posting.
love always, dana

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