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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-06-10 10:34 AM


When there are bbright blue clouds I wonder where are you?
Are you dancing with angels?
I see a cloud forming into your face

I smile at you because then I know your in heaven
you put up a good fight with you cancer
you never did complaine about your pain

But you'd see me in pain
some how you'd help me
I loved that

Your always on my mind
I want to see you again
I want you back with me

So you could help me with things
I really don't want to go to a VOC school
if you were here you'd ask me if I wanted to

I think of you a lot
because it's only a week from Fathers Day
I wish it wasn't a hoilday

Because it hurts without a dad
I want you back into my life so bad
I do love you alot though

Love always,
~*~Ang~*~

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-10 11:13 AM


this was absolutely beautiful!!!
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2 posted 2001-06-10 05:54 PM


great job!...you expressed yourself well...bye Minna

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 2001-06-11 01:30 AM


Well done Minna. I liked it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-06-15 10:33 AM


He'll always be alove in your heart and memories Minna.  He has to be really proud of you.  keep it up and keep strong

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