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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
When there are bbright blue clouds I wonder where are you? Are you dancing with angels? I see a cloud forming into your face I smile at you because then I know your in heaven you put up a good fight with you cancer you never did complaine about your pain But you'd see me in pain some how you'd help me I loved that Your always on my mind I want to see you again I want you back with me So you could help me with things I really don't want to go to a VOC school if you were here you'd ask me if I wanted to I think of you a lot because it's only a week from Fathers Day I wish it wasn't a hoilday Because it hurts without a dad I want you back into my life so bad I do love you alot though Love always, ~*~Ang~*~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
this was absolutely beautiful!!! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job!...you expressed yourself well...bye Minna  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done Minna. I liked it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
He'll always be alove in your heart and memories Minna. He has to be really proud of you. keep it up and keep strong hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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