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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-06-10 10:16 AM


Memeoires
I think of you and how much I miss you
a week from Sunday will be Fathers Day
mom's leaving to Finland June 16th

I wonder what it like in heaven
I see you in my dreams your smiling at me
telling me your doing so good in life

Next June I'll be graduating
I'm scared without my friends
will we keep in touch or we will lose touch

Memories keep coming
because today I got a doughnut
Lucy gave me her paw cause she wanted it!

I said Lucy no I am not dad
she kept giving her paw to me
I started laughing

Dad my heart is still broken
because your not here
I miss you a lot dad

Love Always,
Minna

PS Happy Father's Day where ever you are

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
stace_co2003
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1 posted 2001-06-10 02:29 PM


I like this poem, but it's so sad. aww, *hugs* feel better soon, ok?  

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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2 posted 2001-06-10 05:47 PM


heartfelt poem...hope you feel better...knowing that your father is in a better place ...i liked the poem...bye Minna

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3 posted 2001-06-10 07:18 PM


Such a heart felt poem here. Very sadly written. I wish the best for you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

obscurity of cloud
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4 posted 2001-06-10 07:38 PM


This is so sad and sweet.  You express yourself so well; keep it up!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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5 posted 2001-06-15 10:20 AM


Stay strong Minna.  I know you can.  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

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