Teen Poetry #4 |
Memories of you |
Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Memeoires I think of you and how much I miss you a week from Sunday will be Fathers Day mom's leaving to Finland June 16th I wonder what it like in heaven I see you in my dreams your smiling at me telling me your doing so good in life Next June I'll be graduating I'm scared without my friends will we keep in touch or we will lose touch Memories keep coming because today I got a doughnut Lucy gave me her paw cause she wanted it! I said Lucy no I am not dad she kept giving her paw to me I started laughing Dad my heart is still broken because your not here I miss you a lot dad Love Always, Minna PS Happy Father's Day where ever you are |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I like this poem, but it's so sad. aww, *hugs* feel better soon, ok? I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
heartfelt poem...hope you feel better...knowing that your father is in a better place ...i liked the poem...bye Minna i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Such a heart felt poem here. Very sadly written. I wish the best for you. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is so sad and sweet. You express yourself so well; keep it up! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Stay strong Minna. I know you can. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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