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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
you assumed you knew me who i was inside you made the assumption that this is how i am well you assumed wrong and let me tell you... i assumed this and now im shuving it up your... hah your looking at me thinking ...'wut the jelloW?' this isnt you ...your such a sweet girl that assumption was wrong all i am is me i am what i am assume all you like ok this sux ..im just lettin off some steam. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"all i am is me i am what i am assume all you like" this came out quite nice...i liked it  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting writing. Very blunt. You seem to do well in mincing casual spoken english with written english. Makes for a pretty cool poem. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl.....yikes....yeah letting some steam go! It's great! SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here tiff.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
this was actually a pretty good one contrary to what you may believe. I liked it. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i hate when people assume things...and you definately explained how you feel about it really well..i liked this poem |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
loved it spiffy tiffy!! heehee and there's nothing wrong with letting a little steam out! I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
i liked it nice job tiff Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Evylyn Junior Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 20Florida, USA |
Woo hoo! Go Tiff! *Cheers* That wasn't too bad at all, but I know you can do better. =oP *Waits patiently for your next poem* "The only thing that boggles the mind is the mind itself." |
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takemeawaytoday Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 13Missouri |
cool poem |
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Shyan Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 10Canada |
I liked this one Tiff! Good job! Even so, it still comes out really well. I know that I dont really like when ppls do that to me..........not to mention any names now(not you Tiff) ha ha!  WEll, ne who, love ya an leave ya. |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
*peeks cautiously out of her hiding place* appologizes for assuming..... jo But His word was in my heart |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
haha..it dint suck all that bad hun! *hugz* I liked the last stanza the bestest..good way to let off steam..ya know, rather than like punching someone..n~e~wayz..luv ya ~Anna *waves* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Such powerful emotions being released on this one. good job Tiff...hope to see more hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
:O Yeah!!!!!!! Go Tiff. I love to see this! Nice Nice Nice! Doesn't suck by a long shot! Haha Maybe I should try this..... Castles made of sand, slip into the sea eventually... |
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