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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world 
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one last poem before I go to bed--this one's fer you Frac (written for you, not necessarily about you) ------------------------------------------- A former image of myself Broken and torn to shreds I am older I am wiser I look in the mirror I see my flaws I know my mistakes I know my regrets My eyes seem so cold as I stare in disinlusionment I don't see myself I see someone detached My heart used to be free and I used to love but hurt closed the doors And I became cold then you came into my life my heart is much lighter my dark brown eyes sparkle I once again am warm you opened me up and held me close you also made me realise how beautiful I truly am I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. [This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here stacy! Such a sweet poem! Made me go awwwwww.... I loved it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Stace, I really enjoyed the read  Zu "Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
this is really great! i think it's very well written. Keep posting  "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hm... Nice poem. I told you you don't necessarily have to be all technical when writing poetry. Nice job here. Perhaps I should return the favour sometime.... "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
wonderful! I enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more. And I'm with the others! AWWWW! hheheh *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
This is REALLY GOOD....It was really sweet... Until next time, ~Nikki~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet poem...nice tribute...i liked it lots...how nice of you to write a poem for someone ...bye Stace  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
lol...your little critique thing is alot like fractal's lol. good work. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Beautiful dedication Stace. This is really good. Keep it up and keep sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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