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baby0508
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since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2001-06-05 11:59 AM

The sad music plays behind me
my tears just flow and flow
why can't i seem to bring myself
to simply let you go.

How could you just stop loving me?
it hasn't been that long.
why is all of this happeining
why can't i just be strong?

I'm too scared to let you go
in fear you won't come back to me
and i know if you don't come back
that we weren't meant to be.

so i'm scared to let you go
because i feel we're meant to be
but i'll slowly let you go
and hope you'll come back to me.

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

1 posted 2001-06-05 12:21 PM

I truely loved this peice. I can relate to every word that was written here. this was great, its going in my library.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-05 02:16 PM

Letting go is never easy....but sometimes....very necessary

hope all goes well

Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

3 posted 2001-06-05 02:20 PM

*nods* i know exaclty wut you mean hun ya just gotta let go and pray to God that they come back. i really liked this piece too very well written keep up the awesome work i will pray for you bye bye

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be.
*smiles at you and says 'well done'*

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-05 04:46 PM

very hard situation you wrote here...i hope everything works out well...for you

...bye heather

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-05 11:09 PM

Great job.....this was so sad.I felt it....Soon I myself will have to let go of somebody special. I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

6 posted 2001-06-06 03:29 PM

I really loved this one...it really hit home with me...excellent poem...*hugs*. Only time will heal the hurt...good luck in future writings...
Always,
~Nikki~

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

7 posted 2001-06-06 04:10 PM

This was extremely good. I can relate to this so much. It was very sad, but you can overcome it. I hope things get better, I know they will.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

8 posted 2001-06-06 09:34 PM

i really like this... and as the cliche goes "no man is worth your tears, and the one who is will never make u cry" or whatever... but we don't cry because we're sad, sometimes we cry when we're happy and maybe deep down inside your happy because of the fact he's leaving and you know that secretly he's coming back... i have no idea... i'm just rambling...

hehehe nice job tho! i like it a LOT!

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

9 posted 2001-06-07 10:25 PM

aww *hugs* i loved the poem i hope things work out and that he'll come back if its meant to be!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-06-11 06:44 AM

This was really sad....i agree with the others, if it was meant to be he'll be in your arms again

Keep us updated!

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

11 posted 2001-06-11 09:52 AM

well this was good. Letting go is hard. but all will work out, it usually does.

Regina

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

12 posted 2001-06-11 10:18 AM

It's hard to let go of something we care about or care for. But you are doing the right thing. Beautifully written poem baby0508, keep it up. Thanks for the read

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