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SAy goodbye tell it hurts
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SAy goodbye tell it hurts |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Everything was fine Untell the ambulance you were in drove by I never knew that you were inside Then around lunch time I knew that girl was you I knew you hade bad heart conditions Know I wanna forget its true Once I found out you were really dead All I did was cry I couldn't clear my head I did what I said I would but, when I looked at you It took my tears awhile I want all the pain to be a lie Even when your gone Best friends is what will stay When I look up at the stars I always take a breath and prey I gave your mom a sympathy card I gave your sister flowers I told them I was sorry for my darkest hour was within I think about you all the time It was never mean't to happen and know it did Thanks for the memory that lingers in my mind How I wan't you hear I wanna see your sear sheer as your happiness sheds across your face I wan't to take a long walk while we forever talk... I wan't everything to be okay As I lay in my bed I know the real truth that your... not with us your dead *In memory of Sarah Wiles*BBF Kim Rayann |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Dear Buffy, I am so very sorry for your lose it must have been very tragic for you. Your poem shows wonderful meaning and power behind your words. I know she can see this poem you have made for her and her memory will never be forgotten. And she herself will never die if she lives in the hearts and souls of many for years to come. If you ever need to talk or are in need of a helping hand i am here for you. All you have to do is press that little button and e-mail me. I will be here for you if in need as well as many others here will also. Wonderful poem. And take care. Ps. I am sure Sarah is very proud as am I.< !signature--> What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-27-2001).] |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is so sad. hope you're ok! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is extremely sad...I am so sorry to hear about your loss. I hope you are doing all right. Exellently written poem, writing can often be a great way to expell pain. Keep it up! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'm sad that this happened. My condolences.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh, that's terrible! (Situation, not the writing) I'm very sorry, and I'm sure she's still with you every day. Keep writing. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Buffy you have nothing but my condolences for this unfortunate event. I hope that in writing this piece of poetry, you have gotten rid of some of the pain inside of you. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Yes it was sad to lose her very much. She is close in my heart thats why I wrote it... She will never be forgotten. Kim Rayann |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
A very sad piece indeed. She can live on in memory Best Wishes ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Thank you to all who read this poem... To take time to read it. This means alot to me and much more. Truly~With Love Kim Rayann |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
don't know how i missed this...i understand your feelings..i've lost a friend before and it hurts for a long time but you have to move on...this is a beautiful poem to her "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Thanks for all the comments youv'e posted. I apperciate it for everything anyone has to say Kim Rayann |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh i saw this one in explorer i will say that i like it alot and was thinkin bout mailing you about it but hehehe look how that worked out |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
i guess Faith always finds away huh??? LOL well Thanks alot for reading it AGAIN..... Kim Rayann |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful tribute what a tragedy i do believe that you are wrong in some way though. i believthat she's always there...she''s in your thoughts, and in your heart. And you have proven this to be true. I'm sorry for the loss, but you still are keeping her alive in you  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Thanks Man for your reply. Id like to thank those who singed it. Couldn't get my poem read if it wasen't for you....E-mail me if wanted at [email protected] Kim Rayann |
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