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Teen Poetry #4

sweet dreams

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-06-09 10:34 PM

yea yea...i havent written nething in a few days so thought id try..not my best but there ya go newayz

sweet dreams to you
every single night
nothing but glitter
and mist...
sweet dreams to you
perfect bliss
in your spell cast
sleep...
sweet dreams to you
waking from this deep
seeing all the glitter
was nothing
...but mist

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Where are you when i need you....?

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 06-09-2001).]

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

1 posted 2001-06-09 10:40 PM

Tifferage~
This poem is good...short but sweet..kinda thought-provoking tooz...*hugz* it's been a looong time hun! luv yaz..and rock on; i totally back your reason(s) to take some time away from online and junk..just thought I'd let ya know..*hugz(again)*
~bye...*waves*
~Anna(ya know, that one girl.. :P )

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-06-09 10:44 PM

"waking from this deep
seeing all the glitter
was nothing
...but mist"

Not a long piece, but very meaningful and very well-written. I especally love the quoted part... great thoughts, Tiff! Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-10 03:50 AM

Well done here......reminded me of Snow White for some reason...anybody else?
Anyway, nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

4 posted 2001-06-10 03:06 PM

not your best, no, but still good none-the-less.

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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