Teen Poetry #4 |
Perhaps One Day (sequal to You'll Never Know) |
HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
perhaps one day i'll tell you, of the love i have inside. the fellings will come bursting out, and then no more can i hide. but what will you say? what will you do? that is what troubles me so. you could walk away or worse yet- do nothing at all, and leave me feeling low. or you could act somewhat in favor of me, and say," i like you as a friend." i will settle for that but it won't work that way, and our so called "friendship" will end. i wouldn't be able to take, the ridicule of aiming so hi, when i, myself, am so low. it's time to decide- i've made up my mind, perhaps one day i'll tell you, but for now- You'll Never Know. "So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job!...and this situation was well told...i hope things work out for you...bye Laura i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwww this is another sad one....im getting to like your poetry real quick!...i love the conclusion..ita really great that you were able to end it that way....i hope things work out for you!!..
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
really nice job Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here.....it's so sad. I liked it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
i liked this one. good job It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
sweetie, tell them! it seems to be tormenting you so much! not that I mind the poetry that comes out of it *hugs* I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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