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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-09 01:19 PM

(little girl thinking)

"you left me alone
why did you do it?
your a coward
thats right
nothing more than
dirt
I wont remember
you as strong
Ill remember you as
weak
Thanks for running away
thanks for dying
thank you for those lessons
I really do love you"
Standing at her grave
its too bad this girl
has to deal with my
death
I'm sorry
just remember and try too smile

Regina

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

1 posted 2001-06-09 01:26 PM

wow that is very powerful!!! awsome job ina keep it up!!!

i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!! :)

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

2 posted 2001-06-09 01:35 PM

I liked this one

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-09 03:12 PM

wow!...i loved this poem...great job on writing this

...powerful hard hitting...hope to see more...bye Ina

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-09 07:13 PM

Regi you gave yourself some advice. Try to smile regi ok? I know these are some trying times but you can pull through and you can make it *hugs* I'm here for you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-06-12 10:48 AM

Hmmm the ending part of the poem got to me. ~*hugs Ina*~. Hang in there okies? Be strong

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

6 posted 2001-06-12 11:09 AM

good writ eI like it a lot

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

7 posted 2001-06-12 11:10 AM

Great read I really enjoyed it

Zu

ethel lahootie
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

8 posted 2001-06-12 12:23 PM

i really liked this...im speechless...what more is there to say other than great job
~ethel~

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

9 posted 2001-06-14 01:08 PM

well, it's a good poem. I like all of the poems I've read by you. keep it up!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

10 posted 2001-06-14 01:35 PM

Wow, this is really good, really gets me. I like this one. Keep smiling!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

11 posted 2001-06-14 06:20 PM

hey...i really liked this. i love how you were sarcastic, like "thanks for dying" awesome poem, tis going in my library. later
-fear-

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

12 posted 2001-06-18 11:19 PM

Wow this was a very powerful poem, you had so many feelings mixed into this one i think..or atleast thats what i felt! nice job

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