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Ina
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0 posted 2001-06-09 01:19 PM


(little girl thinking)

"you left me alone
why did you do it?
your a coward
thats right
nothing more than
dirt
I wont remember
you as strong
Ill remember you as
weak
Thanks for running away
thanks for dying
thank you for those lessons
I really do love you"
Standing at her grave
its too bad this girl
has to deal with my
death
I'm sorry
just remember and try too smile

Regina

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lonely*soul
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1 posted 2001-06-09 01:26 PM


wow that is very powerful!!!  awsome job ina  keep it up!!!

i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!! :)

zarina
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2 posted 2001-06-09 01:35 PM


I liked this one
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3 posted 2001-06-09 03:12 PM


wow!...i loved this poem...great job on writing this ...powerful hard hitting...hope to see more...bye Ina

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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4 posted 2001-06-09 07:13 PM


Regi you gave yourself some advice. Try to smile regi ok? I know these are some trying times but you can pull through and you can make it *hugs* I'm here for you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-12 10:48 AM


Hmmm the ending part of the poem got to me.  ~*hugs Ina*~.  Hang in there okies?  Be strong  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

the_rescue
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6 posted 2001-06-12 11:09 AM


good writ eI like it a lot

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

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7 posted 2001-06-12 11:10 AM


Great read I really enjoyed it  
Zu

ethel lahootie
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8 posted 2001-06-12 12:23 PM


i really liked this...im speechless...what more is there to say other than great job
~ethel~

stace_co2003
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9 posted 2001-06-14 01:08 PM


well, it's a good poem. I like all of the poems I've read by you. keep it up!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

angel_2401
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10 posted 2001-06-14 01:35 PM


Wow, this is really good, really gets me. I like this one. Keep smiling!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

fearing-laughter
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11 posted 2001-06-14 06:20 PM


hey...i really liked this.  i love how you were sarcastic, like "thanks for dying"  awesome poem, tis going in my library.  later
-fear-

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12 posted 2001-06-18 11:19 PM


Wow this was a very powerful poem, you had so many feelings mixed into this one i think..or atleast thats what i felt! nice job  
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