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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-09 01:03 PM

How does it feel to be on the
outside little girl?
So many liars out there you
don't want to mess around with
Come on pay attention to me
its important you are strong
get out of the kiddie pool
I'll show you the world in my eyes
the world in my pain
don't cry, I'll always love you
Your going to grow up and be beautiful
beautiful and smart
Let me see your sunshine smile
hold my hand
walk with me
walk away from everyone you don't need
don't run...just stroll
Look into the sun
see it smile
thats all your ever going to need
Please don't cry...
but i have to leave you now
Don't forget about me
just smile and remember

REgina

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-09 01:10 PM

heartfelt...great poem...i really liked how you wrote this

...hope to see more...bye ina

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

2 posted 2001-06-09 01:15 PM

wow i like i like!!! very "hidden message ish" lol but seriously..awsome message!!! they all have to grow up one day...

i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!! :)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-10 12:03 PM

This was good. I liked this one Regi!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-06-11 04:41 PM

Ina, you are a very expressive writer. That is pure talent. Hope you keep writing and sharing your work. Keep it up girl

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

5 posted 2001-06-12 08:42 PM

very nice keep it up!

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

Dana Samples
Member

since 2001-04-07

Posts 68

6 posted 2001-06-12 09:38 PM

VERY nicely put! ilike! keep writin'
love- dana

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