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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-06-09 08:12 AM

Like a Rose unfolding ,
Growing from the conquered.
Becoming from nothing,
Into a seed.
With it’s leafs it’s holding
It’s identity close.
Maybe forgotten but never dyeing,
Always standing tall, always
Rising high.
Speaking the truth,
Revealing tears with feelings.
Never afraid to search for the answer,
The question and unspoken lies.
Exploring it’s sexuality,
Showing pieces of it’s personality.
Wearing the heart on the outside,
Emotional,
Confidential, touching
People with the journey of Jesus
And Gods words.
Like a Rose unfolding,

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved

Raven Skye
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since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

1 posted 2001-06-09 09:20 AM

wow....it's beautiful...simply beautiful...

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
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Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-06-09 12:25 PM

This was a very good piece. There was some aweseome description.

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

3 posted 2001-06-09 12:27 PM

wow i really like this...quite beautiful!!!
*kimmie*

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

4 posted 2001-06-09 06:04 PM

this is very beautiful! hope to read more soon!!

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-10 04:01 AM

Very well done here. I really liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-06-13 07:52 PM

This was absolutely beautiful! More people should have replied to this!! Gorgeous

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7 posted 2001-06-13 11:01 PM

beautiful poem...i enjoyed the read

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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