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MindlessPoet
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

0 posted 2001-06-09 01:59 AM

I know, I haven't been here much. I'm going to try and come here more often, hehe. Anyway, here's something I wrote, not being all that serious, but thought I'd share it anyway.

"Take Me Away"

Please
Please take me away
Take me away from this place where I live
This place where I live that I cannot stand
I cannot stand all this hate that I've found
This hate that I've found, it cannot be cured
It cannot be cured, so please
Please take me away.

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-06-09 02:13 AM

The title reminds me of a song by Lash.

This place sounds terrible. Just remember that to get to the lighter places you have to experience the full extent of the dark.

Good luck and I hope things look up for you.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-09 02:39 AM

its a hard place to stay and also at the same time a hard place to get out...but i believe you will be able to find your way...with teh help of love...i wish you the ebst as i have and is where you are at cuz i wrote about the same topic

...and im glad that you are posting again...bye Tim

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

3 posted 2001-06-09 05:47 PM

I like this poem, cuz I can relate to wanting to get away. but, it's a great piece and I thank you for posting it!

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-10 03:29 AM

Not as good as your other one, but it was still a nice read. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-06-13 07:20 PM

I really liked the format to this poem...good job and keep postin! I really like ur work abd hope to see more

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