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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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one of my poems from teen poetry #3 When I noticed you staring at me I felt sick to my stomach, I knew your reputation so I was afraid The drugs had started to kick in the room spining the hardcore jungle beat drumming in my ears started to fade, lights were dim, my eyes blurry,blocking out any escape from you My legs started to fold underneath me, I felt I fire crawling upon my body my temperature was rising out of panic Two muscular hands grabbed at my side and swung me over his shoulder the thuds on the wooden stairs echoed in my ears I figure whats going to happen and I try to fight and nothing works I can't do anything im being carried away by the drugs, the boy feeling his hands roam my back I feel a bile rise to my throat As i hit a soft cushion its a bed o god please help me! I can't stay awake anymore, darkness envelopes my world i try to fight away the the blacknees but i fall out of conciense I wake the next morning every ache reminds me of what i try to deny what i need to deny... |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Hey Great work Ina, I wish I had caught this one first time around  Zu |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Been there... read that! Ina, now I remember this one. So sad. Another great piece. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ina, is this what I think it is? OMG!!! We seriously need to talk. ~*hugs*~ hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow!...this was powerful and intense even tho i loved the poem...i hated the situation...i hope you are ok ...you wrote this very well ...bye Ina and take care.im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I find this terribly disturbing.....I hope this isn't real...and if this has happened to you, I hope you have talked with an adult you trust....I am always available if you want to talk just email me ok? ~SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh God.....this is heavy stuff Regi. I'm terribly sorry this happened *hugs*...you can talk to me if you need to...you know I'm here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Geez!!! This sounds harsh. I hope it didn't really happen. Sometimes when I look about me I see nothing more than the kind of evil spoken of in this poem... I've always liked the way you are able to write so well in free verse. Kudos. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
all I can say really is wow what a poem and what a story, that rocked so much wow sorry that happened though but the poem and the expression was great The Rescue in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
every ache reminds me of what i try to deny what i need to deny... goshy...i think thats really universal of all incidents of all emotional and physical abuse/violations.... regina i really do hope that you're feeling ok now...the poem is really very well done...powerful images and discriptions-as with all of your poems...you did a great job on this one. keep you head up girl....hope you pull through well 
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
~Ina~ hey this was a really good poem..kinda scary tho :-S i hope it didn't happen to you in real life. -fear- |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Thanks for the repplies everyone |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope you take me up on talking via email....if you want, I'll be here for you |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Wow. This one really catches you, and makes you think. If it really did happen, I'm sorry... I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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