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Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-06-09 01:52 AM

What can I say about your eyes?
It’s all been written, said before me.
But I’ll say this: they hypnotize
Especially when they adore me.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-06-09 02:08 AM

Short but sweet, Master. Plus the music I'm listening to at the moment really helped deliver the message a lot better.

Nice work.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-09 02:32 AM

yea...i also listen to music while i read poems...but even though it didnt fit the discription this time of the poem...but this was a sweet poem...hope you gave this to her

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-06-09 07:35 AM

short and sweet.

fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-06-09 12:28 PM

This was very good. short. powerful.

Regina

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

5 posted 2001-06-09 12:30 PM

wow this was very good, actully like this best by you..it may be simple..but very powerful!!! awsome job!
*KiMMiE*

i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!! :)

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

6 posted 2001-06-09 06:07 PM

it seems kinda odd to call you master, but this is a good poem. I enjoyed it.

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-10 03:33 AM

Well said!! Wowness....so simple but you did it once again. Another amazing piece.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-06-13 07:05 PM

Always a pleasant read M
keep it up

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

9 posted 2001-06-13 07:28 PM

Impressive. That sounds like something I'd deliver to a significant other as a love note, lol. Good job.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-06-17 07:49 PM

This was so good! i love how eyes are so magical...they are a window to a persons soul

Gorgeous write here..keep it up!

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