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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-08 09:52 PM

Okay, I'm not exactly sure where this came from, but I wrote it just now. lol I'm moving on from the person who I used to like a LOT, but I still can't help this stuff. Anyway, go ahead and read to find out. Definitely not my best, but oh well.

I CANT HELP

I can't help but have a little
Jealousy when I see him with you
But I know that you'll never be with me
And there's nothing I can do

I can't help but have a little
Anger when I see you together
He never treats you how you should be
Yet to him I am nether

I can't help but have a little
Confusion of why he's so great
Why can't I have a chance with you?
I'm tired of it, I'm not going to wait

I can't help but have a little
Hope for him to be good to you
He seems to keep you happy
And that's as much as I could do

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

1 posted 2001-06-08 10:52 PM

I liked your poem Cody keep on writing.
-nicholas-

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-06-09 11:02 AM

Hey!
I liked this one alot.
It sucks being on the side watching and wanting...
Great job on the poem!

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-09 12:28 PM

This was very good work Cody. Ya that position is never fun. wish all works out.

Regina

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

4 posted 2001-06-09 12:39 PM

ya i know how ya feel, very well written cody... keep on posting em (and you should check out the teen chat...)

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-06-09 01:33 PM

Way To Go Idaho! Lol too much toy story for me

I loved this poem, you made it seem as if she knew you were there but didn't. Keep smiling hunny, things will get better

Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-10 12:38 PM

Well done here man.......good to know yer kinda getting over here. It'll take a bit of time. Good luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

7 posted 2001-06-10 12:44 PM

If anything, I've written more poems about this type of thing than I can count on an army of fingers. I like this. Be nice to read to the aforementioned girl/guy

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

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