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MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-06 09:00 PM

I need you and I need love
I need truth and I need God
I don't know just how to say
But I love you anyway

I want to start right now
getting closer to you somehow
breaking down the walls I've built
Don't want to be apart from you
wondering without a clue

When we talk everyday
I realize Heaven's not so far away
Every night I wish on a star
Wishing to be where you are.

I'm Lonely for you
Are you lonely for me?
I'll never try to hide
the way I feel inside.

I'm still going crazy over you
What am I going to do?
I try to think
But theres no room for two
It's all you
I'm all about you!
You make my heart
speak everything thats true
I miss you
I Love You

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-06-06 09:09 PM

This poem was so full of emotion...very enjoyable

Keep on postin!

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-06-08 12:12 PM

Nice Poem. I enjoyed reading it.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-08 12:44 PM

very emotional poem here...hope things are alright

and i liked the poem...bye Ewok

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

quitstaringatmenow
Junior Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 10

4 posted 2001-06-08 12:48 PM

Very nice. I think you conveyed feelings that a lot of us have at one point or another. I look forward to reading more, for sure!

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

5 posted 2001-06-09 10:32 PM

hi there...this poem is awesome..it sounds just like a song..even though it's not..it's a poem..anyways, great display of emotions..and even though it rhymed, it wasn't a cheesy rhyme, it was a flowing river type of rhyme..great poem Ewokz!
~bye *waves*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-10 03:52 AM

Nicely done here. I enjoyed this poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

7 posted 2001-06-10 02:53 PM

awwww ewoksters....this is great *Sniff* twas very heartfelt and sayadish. you did a great job on it.
*hugs* i love you and miss you!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

Where are you when i need you....?

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