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anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

0 posted 2001-06-08 12:16 PM

well there are a lot of new faces around here..i've missed out..sorry guys, lately i really haven't had the time to come online..i just wanted to run this poem by you guys..it's about this friend of mine who got into a tragic accident recently and i want to give her a poem that explains how i and how all her friends feel..

As you walk with the sun at your heels
The sky cries out,
for penetrating the tears of something beautiful
entrusts us how to feel

Your heated breath breathes life into me
and as the tears start to flow
and i finally feel alive,
I see what it is hiding underneath your skin-
it radiates beams of ecstacy,
that flow and rest in my body,
in which i learn what happiness is

well that's it..it's short but it's hard to write about recent raw emotions..i'm going to see her in the hospital tm..

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

1 posted 2001-06-08 12:24 PM

I like it the wording was cool

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-06-08 02:24 PM

YOU!

I can't believe you're back! You don't realize how much I missed your poetry!
About the situation...whoa its tough. Good luck...and like always, a magnificent poem...
~Carly

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..."
~Edouard Manet

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

3 posted 2001-06-08 02:30 PM

aww i loved it *hugz* i hope everything gets better!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-08 04:59 PM

sweet tribute poem...i hope you DO give it to her

...i wish her the best...bye Alexei

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-09 06:57 PM

Dude, really nice to see you back! I love your poetry!
This was raw emotion.....pretty out there and very different from your other poems, but this is a very dif. situation you're experiencing. My prayers out to yer friend....hope all goes well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-06-11 11:29 PM

I havent seen you in ages!! LoL Nice to have ya back w/us!! Yes a lotta new people joined us but the more the merrier! Nice to see your work again..keep it comin!

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