Teen Poetry #4 |
Express My Mind |
PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
It's a scream inside, A pure fun factor Plaid Pants and Skirts, Blue Mohawks Loud Music It's me, this scream, LET IT OUT! Chains and Bracelets, speak your mind No rule This is us, these screams, LET IT OUT! It's a scream inside a pure PUNK factor [This message has been edited by PiXiEpUnKeR (edited 06-08-2001).] |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Right on punk rawk all the way! by the way poem was good lol in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
very interesting....good job Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
same here...interesting ...bye i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
hey that's cool. i've been on the inside of the "punk scene" before.... i guess i got really fed up with the "you're not punky unless you're punky like me" kind of attitude that I kept seeing... as I see it, by their own deffinition "punk" is about being yourself... not being "yourself just like the rest of your clique"... because that is just an elitist form of conformity... anyways.. sorry. I guess i'm done spouting off. keep rocking. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
I honestly see punk as really loving the music... relating to it... and really expressing yourself to express YOURself.. not just to LOOK punk... to dress and act punk because you FEEL punk... not cause everyone else is doing it!! Thanks for your imput!! This is one of my more "fun" poems, I'm glad to see the response to it! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Booya! Being punk is the stuff. Great expression in this piece. Be true to yourself, be punk. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I like this.....well, I don't really know what the punk scene is all about, I've never been there or done that...but I like the poem that came out of it I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was interesting....Well I'm not a "punk" but I am myself and I can scream so yea.....scream! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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