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DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

0 posted 2001-06-08 06:46 PM

ok i just felt like writing something not so serious....so here it is.

Oh this frizz in my hair!
How inconvenient
Every morning the same thing
Wake up at 5
With hair that should have its own zip code
Lining my bathroom sink,
Bottles such as.....
“Frizz-ease”
“Goodbye frizz”
“Kiss frizz ta-ta”
“Frizz today gone tomorrow”
20 products or more!
All who claim to be better than the rest
Ahh but what to use?
What to use?
I prefer them all!
I think to myself, “This hair will put them to the test!”
I slap all of it on
To tame this wild hair
Blow dry it straight
Then iron it flat
Oh this frizz in my hair!
After all is done
I stare wide eyed in the mirror
And one thing comes to mind
Oh my!
It’s 20 years behind!
Darn this frizz!!!

hehe my hair is on crack i swear!! lol not really. i hope ya all got the 20 years behind thing...

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 49
IL, USA

1 posted 2001-06-08 06:48 PM

AHHH I LOVE THIS! I really love a poem that you could read that gets the point across but DOESNT bring you down! Good luck with your hair troubles and check out some of my posts please! I love the comments!

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-06-08 08:45 PM

HaHa- Cute Poem. I don't have the frizz problem... I have completely straight and flat hair.... It's horrible...
But I guess the grass is always greener on the other side.

Anyway- Good poem.

BTW- I liked your lil ending comment in your Critique message. " My mom couldn't afford real therapy."

n e where
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

3 posted 2001-06-08 09:06 PM

heheh wat a cute poem

well done and i know wat u mean about the damn frizz!

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-08 09:29 PM

hehe...cute poem...great job...creative lol

and if this problem persist for a long time i think it would be best to just shave it all off

...bye kat

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-08-2001).]

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

5 posted 2001-06-09 12:46 PM

hee hee hee... you made me laugh... nice break after all the emotional sad stuff...
yah, shave it off and dye your scalp red... always a good way out.

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

6 posted 2001-06-09 10:18 AM

haha newhere i was going to say damn frizz at the end but i didnt know if i was allowed to in this forum *shrugs* oh well.

albert and Dr jo! grrr how could you even suggest such a thing! im not shaving my hair off!! hehe

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

7 posted 2001-06-09 11:34 AM

hahaha. this was good, i liked it. made me laugh. good job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

8 posted 2001-06-09 12:19 PM

hehe im sooo glad i dont gotta go through that..i love my hair!!!

i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!!

[This message has been edited by lonely*soul (edited 06-09-2001).]

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

9 posted 2001-06-09 12:43 PM

This was very cool. very fiunny

Regina

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

10 posted 2001-06-09 06:22 PM

I like this poem and I know how you feel!~ it takes me FOREVER to tame my hair!! and I can't always do it either!!

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

11 posted 2001-06-10 03:37 AM

Down with frizz..down!
Nicely put!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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