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HVNsnt82086
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 30
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0 posted 2001-06-07 10:25 PM

We will be together,
Forever in my mind.
In my heart,
You will be my best friend for all time.

And when I was down,
You came around,
And made me love my life.

Can't you see?
You meant everything to me.
Without you,
Nothing is right.

And though we're far apart,
You're always in my heart.
And there you'll stay,
Until the day
I die.

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

[This message has been edited by HVNsnt82086 (edited 06-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Laura Katherine - All Rights Reserved

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

1 posted 2001-06-07 10:29 PM

aww i love all your poems they are sooo good! this was great keep up the good work and i cant wait to read your next one!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

2 posted 2001-06-08 12:19 PM

Wow! You got your message out so clearly. This was truly a beautiful poem! Keep smiling hunny

Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

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3 posted 2001-06-08 12:46 PM

great ending...and the whole poem was nice...expressed so well

...i enjoyed it!...bye Laura

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

quitstaringatmenow
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since 2001-06-06

Posts 10

4 posted 2001-06-08 12:50 PM

I really liked your poem. I could relate to it a lot.

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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5 posted 2001-06-09 11:24 PM

I thought this was nicely done.
Good job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
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6 posted 2001-06-10 02:58 AM

this was great. i liked it a lot. good job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

7 posted 2001-06-10 10:19 AM

That was so awesome, and so cute.

Minna

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