Teen Poetry #4 |
Child Abuse |
Captivating1 Junior Member
since 2001-06-07
Posts 15Houston, TX |
Poem has been deleted due to Suicide content. Harm for one's self or harm to others is against Passions Guidelines. If you would like to know more about the guidelines, I'd be happy to brief you on it. Thanks for your consideration and understanding. acire (moderator/teen forum) |
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ShortSexyAngel777 New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 9Louisiana, USA |
omg, i started crying at this poem. my father sometimes hits me, and i can totally relate to it. it put a clear picture in my mind, and was very well written. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
damn...depressing LoL. well written though. i liked this one a lot, keep postin :-) -fear- |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! What a wonderful first post! I really enjoyed it...it was so sad tho! Beautifully written. Nice to have u with us! P.S.- Check your e-mail for a special message |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow...this was powerful and very emotional filled also protrayed so well through a sad sad life...i really liked the way you wrote it as it came quite real situation for me...great first post ...hope to see more...and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...bye i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very sad poem. I went through a period in my life like this, and TRULY thought about taking the same path that Wendy from your poem did. Scary though, looking back on it. Great poem. Welcome and I hope to see more soon. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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