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DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2001-06-04 02:15 AM

As I close my eyes and drift away
to where all my dreams come true
Dancing atop the clouds, tasting the breeze
complete and total happiness in all I do

Lying in your arms, so safe and secure
moving closer to hear the beat of your heart
So in love as our surroundings fade
a place where you and I are never apart

Floating away with every breath I take
no worries, no struggles, no fears
Tranquility of the mind only exists
peaceful silence is all one hears

----k i couldn't finish this...but heres what i have for now..maybe i can finish it later

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-06-04 02:59 AM

Yea it did end rather abruptly. I like what you have though....so far it's quite well written. Hope to see you finish it soon!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-04 03:12 AM

its turning out greart...i really like it so far...hope you finsih it soon and share with us once more...

...until then bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-06-04 10:31 AM

One more stanza will complete it beautifulle Sweets. keep it up

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-06-04 01:08 PM

definately needs a bit more...but yeah...very nice so far

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

5 posted 2001-06-05 06:54 PM

It's really very beautiful. Maybe if you leave it for awhile, something will come. When you finish it, be sure to post up the finished product! I'd like very much to see it!

¤ ¢H@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-06-07 11:09 AM

You got the last lines yet?

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-06-07 02:44 PM

I havent seen your poems in a while, its nice to see from you again! Do finish it..i'd love to see what the ending is gonna be like but so far what you have is really good...good job hun

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