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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-06-07 03:34 PM

Never have I seen before,
The way you looked at me,
Never have I felt before,
That I was truly free.

Never have I touched before,
Skin as soft as thine,
Never have I kissed before,
Lips so sweet and fine,

Never have I loved before,
The way that I love you,
Never have I longed before,
The way I wait for you.

Never have I hoped before,
The way I’d hoped you’d call,
Never have I dreamed before,
That I could catch you when you fall.

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-07 05:19 PM

i liked this poem in the sense when you feel the feeling for another when you find love...and i think you wrote it quite well...great job

...bye Adam

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

2 posted 2001-06-07 08:37 PM

hmmm.....from the poems i read from you today i have to say.....I THINK SOMEONES IN LOVE!!! hehe just messin' with ya.

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

3 posted 2001-06-07 08:55 PM

Nah...just hopeful wishings. Haven't found anyone for me yet.

-Kosetsu

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-06-08 06:51 PM

Sweet poem.
I liked it.

PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 49
IL, USA

5 posted 2001-06-08 06:54 PM

This I can relate to!! OH MY GOD I love this poem! Can I have your permission to copy it and send it to my boyfriend! Great work! I cant think of anything to change it... good wording, good everything! Check out some of my posts! I love comments!

LCsftball16
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 39

6 posted 2001-06-08 07:02 PM

i loved your poem! thanks for sharing!

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

7 posted 2001-06-08 07:45 PM

I don't mind, Pixie. Just tell him who wrote it.

-Kosetsu

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-06-10 12:28 PM

This was really great! I loved the flow here! Very well done. I liked it so much.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

9 posted 2001-06-10 12:32 PM

Wow, i love the flow to this. The rhyme was nice too. Very enjoyable! Great work!

¤ ¢H@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤

I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this...
So, this guy walks into a bar...OW!!! :)

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

10 posted 2001-06-10 12:58 PM

Kose you always deliver in terms of fantasticness. Congrats

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

11 posted 2001-06-10 02:51 AM

I loved this poem. it was great.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

12 posted 2001-06-10 03:01 PM

I really like this poem man. I don't think I've read one by you that I don't like. keep it up!

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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