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HVNsnt82086
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0 posted 2001-06-07 01:41 PM


When I am in darkness,
you are my light.
When I am blind,
you give me sight.
When I am unsure,
you make everything seem right.

You are my HERO.

When I am meek,
you make me stand tall.
When I lose my balance,
you catch me as I fall.
When I am pleading,
you answer my call.

You are my HERO.

When I am crying,
you wipe away my tears.
When I am afraid,
you calm all my fears.
When I need you,
you are there through the years.

You are my HERO.

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

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DarkAngelOfTheStars
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1 posted 2001-06-07 02:15 PM


hey nice poem very good  

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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2 posted 2001-06-07 02:28 PM


Its wonderful that you have someone to play this important role in your life   Good poem...keep em comin!
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3 posted 2001-06-07 05:04 PM


the person here sounds like someone...graet!...and hope he is also i hope you told him or gave this to him...very nice poem...i liekd it...bye

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MindlessPoet
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4 posted 2001-06-07 08:31 PM


Hola!  Nice poem for [what seems to be] a nice person. I'm sure he'll love it, hehe.

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

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5 posted 2001-06-09 07:35 PM


I thought this was a sweet poem. Whoever this hero is the person must be special. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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