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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-06-06 09:10 PM


When he's around,
I feel so weak.
And when we touch,
I can hardly speak.
He makes me laugh,
and he makes me smile.
I haven't felt this way,
in such a while.
He likes to flirt,
so much with me.
My feelings for him,
I want him to see.

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-06 09:11 PM


omg i absolutely love this!!!     great job... i so relate... hahaha    keep up the great writing... your good at it  


Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2001-06-06 09:18 PM


Aww this was such a good poem! Its so hard getting feelings across at first cuz your so scared of whats gonna happen...but we'll all hope for the best!!   Make the move hehehe
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3 posted 2001-06-09 06:24 PM


If you want him to see them then you should show them....
I liked the poem. Had a nice flow to it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
4 posted 2001-06-09 07:00 PM


Aww... Love...  
Such a sweet poem!

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