Teen Poetry #4 |
Flirt |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
When he's around, I feel so weak. And when we touch, I can hardly speak. He makes me laugh, and he makes me smile. I haven't felt this way, in such a while. He likes to flirt, so much with me. My feelings for him, I want him to see. fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
omg i absolutely love this!!! great job... i so relate... hahaha keep up the great writing... your good at it Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was such a good poem! Its so hard getting feelings across at first cuz your so scared of whats gonna happen...but we'll all hope for the best!! Make the move hehehe |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
If you want him to see them then you should show them.... I liked the poem. Had a nice flow to it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Aww... Love... Such a sweet poem! |
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